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Post by Swearingworth on Nov 2, 2008 23:18:05 GMT -5
the amazing girl the one from my dreams her sweet lips, soft like velvet, shine with a dark strawberry-colored glisten. her eyes a dark green dancing with fiery hazel they sing a joyous harmony under the moon her silky brown hair, the color of autumn, glimmers in the moonlight saying "no more fear" her voice is the passion of every soul her song is the love of every heart she fills me with peace her neck is a stronghold. a strong tower her shoulders are the castle wall her breasts are two fawns, singing merrily her cheeks are sweet pomegranates she wears no makeup because god blessed her with beauty her eyes her eyes... if there were one thing about that girl, it's her eyes. her laugh that girls laugh her laugh is.. is... something beyond metaphors. beyond similes. beyond comprehension and comparison
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Post by soccerking on Nov 4, 2008 12:05:04 GMT -5
Nice, very poetic.
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Post by avenger on Nov 4, 2008 18:11:36 GMT -5
very nice
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Post by Sandmaster on Nov 7, 2008 18:37:23 GMT -5
crap. Now I'm depressed again. (that means it was good)
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Post by Swearingworth on Nov 14, 2008 0:58:13 GMT -5
lol
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Post by shirogake on Nov 14, 2008 8:01:42 GMT -5
Although it was nicely put and very poetic, I feel no emotion as to the meaning of it.
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Buggy793
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{S=6}One Fish, Two Fish. Red Fish, Blue Fish.[M:-793]
I never pronounce names wrong. People just want them mispronounced for some reason.
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Post by Buggy793 on Nov 15, 2008 22:19:11 GMT -5
...Heartless Zonari... Is this the same girl you wrote about before in "I Thought I Loved You?"
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Post by Swearingworth on Nov 20, 2008 13:45:48 GMT -5
No
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Post by Sandmaster on Nov 21, 2008 18:58:09 GMT -5
How many people do you write about??
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Post by Swearingworth on Nov 22, 2008 1:14:01 GMT -5
2.5
5/2
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Buggy793
Legendary Member
{S=6}One Fish, Two Fish. Red Fish, Blue Fish.[M:-793]
I never pronounce names wrong. People just want them mispronounced for some reason.
Posts: 815
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Post by Buggy793 on Nov 22, 2008 3:11:54 GMT -5
I only wonder what that .5 is supposed to mean...
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Post by ~Memzak~ on Nov 22, 2008 8:51:33 GMT -5
2.5.... lol
what did you do? cut one in half? XD
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Post by Swearingworth on Nov 22, 2008 17:31:34 GMT -5
something like that...
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Buggy793
Legendary Member
{S=6}One Fish, Two Fish. Red Fish, Blue Fish.[M:-793]
I never pronounce names wrong. People just want them mispronounced for some reason.
Posts: 815
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Post by Buggy793 on Nov 22, 2008 21:02:52 GMT -5
Don't want to know... Don't want to know... Don't want to know... Don't want to know... Don't want to know... Don't want to know...
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Post by Sandmaster on Nov 29, 2008 17:34:44 GMT -5
want to know... want to know... want to know... want to know... want to know... want to know...
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fusion
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HAS a personal life.
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Post by fusion on Nov 30, 2008 9:58:28 GMT -5
I would be jealous of you, considering your description of this girl, if i didn't already like someone else
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Post by TBP on Nov 30, 2008 16:18:00 GMT -5
That's really good! =] Very descriptive
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Post by Swearingworth on Dec 1, 2008 0:32:11 GMT -5
every day she astounds me whispering my name what does she see in me? wealth, i have none talents, i have none what can i give, but my undying love?
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Post by Sandmaster on Dec 3, 2008 16:53:31 GMT -5
YAY SEQUEL!
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Post by The One on Jan 12, 2009 16:56:04 GMT -5
Very well put.
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