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Post by Mohamad Abd Al Raman on Jun 24, 2009 16:02:38 GMT -5
Be warned this will countian FALSE 9/11 theories.
Chapter 1 ---1987--- When I was about 10 I started to notice alot of CCTV cams, at first I did not care, I was 10 so I was into all the action man toys. When I started to really start noticing them is when I woke up one saturday morning and opening my curtains I saw a CCTV cam out of my window on a lamp outside my house. I did not know what they were doing there because there was no gang crime back then or terrorist activity so I did not know what was going on. So I went down stairs and ask my father what was going on, but he did not know whatI was talking about because he was a very busy man who owned small company called AOL back then we did not know what we could do to it.
Weeks later a black car pulled outside my house am 2 men came out of the car with guns and a shutcase I did not know what was in it. So I hid underneth my covers. And then I heard a loud banging noise like bombs was going off. The man was breaking in the door down and silence. Seconds later i heard i light hissing sound like a snake and soudly fall on couches.
I woke up in a tied to a chair and I had a pistol put to my head they treating me "If I don't shut up about the CCTV cams they will get me killed". So I shut up about it.
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Post by Mohamad Abd Al Raman on Jun 24, 2009 16:35:40 GMT -5
Whopes CLOSED
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Post by The Dark Master on Jun 27, 2009 6:00:06 GMT -5
Please no double posting. More of it could result in a warning level.
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Post by ~Kill3r~ on Jun 29, 2009 9:49:09 GMT -5
good story!! very interesting... u might want to finish the first chapter though... and correct the spelling mistakes... other than that... its really good
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Post by Mohamad Abd Al Raman on Jun 30, 2009 12:00:27 GMT -5
Kill3r i hire you as my grammar correcter in my stories could you do that for me? PLEASE because i am dyslexic
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Post by The Dark Master on Jun 30, 2009 14:17:24 GMT -5
I could do it.
EDIT: Grammar and spelling corrected
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