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Post by artik on Oct 3, 2009 12:15:15 GMT -5
The way they use the word "Freak" throws off the seriousness a little bit, but it's still good! UPDATE IT NOW
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Post by Angel on Oct 3, 2009 13:24:40 GMT -5
The term "Freak" is the word society dubbed them with when it was realized they were "special."
I'll have the next chapter later, right now I'm a little preoccupied.
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Post by Qwerty on Oct 3, 2009 18:30:58 GMT -5
Cliche... overdose... must... get... air...
Okay, the story itself is somewhat interesting, but the writing style is just so... well... un-good. No offense, but I couldn't even stand it long enough to finish the story.
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Post by darkraine on Oct 5, 2009 21:05:55 GMT -5
I have to agree . . . major cliche overdose
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Post by V.I.R.O.S. on Oct 5, 2009 22:06:11 GMT -5
Qwerty's post is exactly what I was thinking. I was just too nice to say it first >.>
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Post by Angel on Oct 10, 2009 10:16:20 GMT -5
Ugh, I hate critics...
Anyway, sorry guys, I've been grounded(I just snuck on now) and it'll be a while before I come back, most likely.
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Post by artik on Oct 10, 2009 10:33:06 GMT -5
-throws party- >
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Post by Qwerty on Oct 10, 2009 15:16:24 GMT -5
Well, if you ask people what they think, expect critics...
Anywho, we shall be here when you return. Unless Molopoy finds out our addresses. Then, we are screwed.
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Post by Angel on Oct 21, 2009 13:03:24 GMT -5
Can someone delete this thread? I'm going to focus on something else.
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Post by artik on Oct 21, 2009 19:35:07 GMT -5
no
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Post by avenger on Oct 25, 2009 13:53:30 GMT -5
Well whers is the story? I dont see one....
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