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Post by Skribbblie on Mar 31, 2010 20:38:43 GMT -5
You see a child, naught 10 years old on the nearby balcony. You are at a luxurious hotel on vacation. It is night, and the moon shines brightly on the river just below. The child looks like he sees something over the edge. You ask, "What do you see?" He doesn't answer. He climbs upon the edge to look closer. Suddenly, the guard rail breaks! You desperately call for help, but it is too late. The child falls, breaks his neck, and drowns in the river. You are scarred by what you have seen. Two nights later, you look across the water from the balcony. The memory of what happened is still fresh in your mind. The moon is especially bright tonight. You feel as though you are absorbed into it's haunting reflection. You feel light as a feather, like you are a cloud. You lose control and you yourself plummet to your death. As it goes dark, you think you see the face of the child... The End.
I can't even remember how I came up with this. I was just getting up one morning, and then. Post comments below (Obviously).
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Post by TBP on Apr 3, 2010 9:50:49 GMT -5
awesome dude.
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Post by Skribbblie on Apr 15, 2010 18:53:29 GMT -5
If I remember correctly, I came up with this when I was taking a shower one morning and I was really tired. But thanks. I actually find it kinda disturbing.
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Post by TBP on Apr 16, 2010 6:49:24 GMT -5
it isn't disturbing lol
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