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Post by novahoshi on Feb 9, 2009 22:32:18 GMT -5
The end of the earth is coming! Isn't the revenge of earth rumbling? Is he the one to have a plan? Down to every grain of sand. Is he the one to tell a lie? A god who gave his son to die. To move the rock it took three days. And arise from the dead in mysterious ways. Is he there to catch me when I fall? The god who stands true and tall The ones that laugh and reject his hand. Shall be bared away from his beautiful land. Where will they be at the finish line. In a place down low with their own kind. Are you the fool to feed the beast. And join him in his miserable feast. He presents himself to be a duke. But through and through he remain a fluke. For those who laughed it will be too late. Eternity with the beast will be their fath. Just be sure to take the right path. Or you might wake-up and not like the aftermath...
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Post by Soul Alchemist on Feb 9, 2009 22:36:59 GMT -5
wow...just....WOW I loved it. *applauds* (even tho I saw a typo in the 3rd to last line...)
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Post by novahoshi on Feb 9, 2009 22:52:25 GMT -5
Nah...I'm to lazy to change it... And thank you.
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Post by GrandEnder on Feb 10, 2009 7:01:33 GMT -5
Very nice.
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Post by Sandmaster on Feb 10, 2009 16:42:28 GMT -5
Nice job, by religulous, do you mean religious?
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Post by novahoshi on Feb 10, 2009 17:56:35 GMT -5
again I don't know how to spell every well I have a mind of a 3rd grader when it come of spelling and English
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Post by Sandmaster on Feb 10, 2009 20:42:11 GMT -5
English is easy! I can easily avoid tyops!
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Post by Qwerty333 on Feb 11, 2009 18:34:13 GMT -5
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Post by Sandmaster on Feb 11, 2009 21:29:59 GMT -5
Very nice
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Post by Qwerty333 on Feb 12, 2009 7:46:33 GMT -5
You and Listo are both very good at writing poems. *claps some more* :)
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Post by Sandmaster on Feb 12, 2009 19:43:27 GMT -5
What about meee? ? *sob*
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