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Beloved
Jun 3, 2008 23:11:09 GMT -5
Post by Swearingworth on Jun 3, 2008 23:11:09 GMT -5
Your eyes are like beautiful emeralds shimmering in the soft moonlight. Your hair is like silk, elegently falling upon your proud shoulders. Your cheeks are like ripe pomegranates gently pressed upon your face. Your lips are like red roses always speaking the truth. And your voice is like the sound of a thousand harps. Soon my beloved, we will be together forever.
Goodbye.
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Beloved
Jun 3, 2008 23:31:34 GMT -5
Post by ShiningSilver on Jun 3, 2008 23:31:34 GMT -5
So sad ):
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Post by Swearingworth on Jun 4, 2008 1:26:28 GMT -5
Though you don't see me, I am by your side. When you need me, beckon upon my name and I shall come for you. And though you don't notice me, come to me when you are down. Whether it be midnight or dawn I am there for you. -Your beloved
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Beloved
Jun 5, 2008 18:57:10 GMT -5
Post by Hi peoples on Jun 5, 2008 18:57:10 GMT -5
wth this sucks i dont get it is she dead?
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Beloved
Jun 5, 2008 19:49:34 GMT -5
Post by Sandmaster on Jun 5, 2008 19:49:34 GMT -5
Quite poetic. I can uderstand what happens, but if he needs to accomplish something to be together with her, whi not just call her name?
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Beloved
Jun 5, 2008 22:14:36 GMT -5
Post by Swearingworth on Jun 5, 2008 22:14:36 GMT -5
Quite poetic. I can uderstand what happens, but if he needs to accomplish something to be together with her, whi not just call her name? ((Thats what I just asked myself. I think he shall. By the way nice sig)) I love you, though I may only be a friend, why not more? Do you not enjoy my company? Have we not shared laughs? I now beckon to you. I call upon thy name. Do you answer? Do you feel this also? How can I keep it inside any longer? I can't, I shan't. Your beauty lures me. Your voice calls me. I cannot hide forever. So now I lay this before you, will you, marry me? I want to spend eternety by your side. I want to be with you till the end of time. We shall be together until heaven calls us away. not even death could tear us apart. It's all or nothing. So, do you love me? I say these things in love, -The man who wishes to let you in his heart. (as for what she answers, that part hasn't happened yet in real life.. this is the only place that i could say this. if my friends saw this, they would think I am a freak. )
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Post by Sandmaster on Jun 6, 2008 5:13:33 GMT -5
That makes sense now, but it reallyh makes it shorter than I expected.
All right, it is very nice so far. I cannot really expect what will happen next...
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Post by Hi peoples on Jun 6, 2008 6:13:56 GMT -5
weird -.-"
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Post by shirogake on Jun 6, 2008 9:28:38 GMT -5
Hi peoples: If you don't like it, don't read. Simple enough. If you're reading it, then you obviously like it. This doesn't suck. Now don't insult others' stories, and to an extent, the users themselves.
As for this poem, I find it quite touching. Is there this.... special someone in your life?
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Beloved
Jun 6, 2008 13:40:25 GMT -5
Post by Swearingworth on Jun 6, 2008 13:40:25 GMT -5
((well i'm friends with someone but I like her more than as a friend, but I don't know if she likes me back.))
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Beloved
Jun 6, 2008 13:43:21 GMT -5
Post by Randomness on Jun 6, 2008 13:43:21 GMT -5
I know how that feels when every time you get near her you want to say it but you cant and you just stand there thinking the whole time.
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Beloved
Jun 6, 2008 13:49:01 GMT -5
Post by Swearingworth on Jun 6, 2008 13:49:01 GMT -5
((yes! thats exactly what it's like! I want to proclaim it to the world! but I just stand there and can't say anything about it. And to make it even more awkward, my other good friend likes me(so I'm told) but I just want to be friends >.< ))
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Beloved
Jun 6, 2008 13:58:23 GMT -5
Post by Randomness on Jun 6, 2008 13:58:23 GMT -5
Haha. Even though Im young i know. Im in a similar situation but its not love its a secret i've got.
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Beloved
Jun 7, 2008 22:23:27 GMT -5
Post by shirogake on Jun 7, 2008 22:23:27 GMT -5
I get what you mean, Swearinworth. I have a friend(Girl), and we became nice friends over the last few weeks of school left. What's not to like about her? She's kind, smart, sexy, and not to mention, she can make anyone smile IMO.
You feel similar?
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Beloved
Jun 7, 2008 22:34:19 GMT -5
Post by ROBiT on Jun 7, 2008 22:34:19 GMT -5
Um... I'm staying out of this =]
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Beloved
Jun 8, 2008 15:27:00 GMT -5
Post by Swearingworth on Jun 8, 2008 15:27:00 GMT -5
I get what you mean, Swearinworth. I have a friend(Girl), and we became nice friends over the last few weeks of school left. What's not to like about her? She's kind, smart, sexy, and not to mention, she can make anyone smile IMO. You feel similar? ((yes, totally. That's just how I feel. BTW thats not the end. Although we won't hear the response.[that is unless I finally ask her in RL] I'll still continue this segment.))
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Beloved
Jun 9, 2008 12:16:21 GMT -5
Post by ROBiT on Jun 9, 2008 12:16:21 GMT -5
o...k....
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Beloved
Jun 21, 2008 10:54:04 GMT -5
Post by Sandmaster on Jun 21, 2008 10:54:04 GMT -5
Since Ninjarachnid is here, I am unable to discuss my situation.
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Beloved
Jun 29, 2008 20:33:04 GMT -5
Post by ROBiT on Jun 29, 2008 20:33:04 GMT -5
I don't want to know what you meant by that ^^...
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Beloved
Jul 5, 2008 22:43:25 GMT -5
Post by Swearingworth on Jul 5, 2008 22:43:25 GMT -5
btw I wrote this before I liked the current girl.
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