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Post by Exthara on Aug 1, 2008 6:16:13 GMT -5
You kill me,
Why I ask,
Why did you stab my back,
You make me feel so betrayed,
Love me one second hate me the next,
So leave me here to die,
I know you don't care,
I am but a shadow to you,
You do this all the time,
And make me feel like,
Everything I love,
Is a sinner,
And a liar like you.
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Post by shirogake on Aug 1, 2008 8:37:06 GMT -5
It's liar, not lier.
Other than that, nice poem/whatever you want it to be.
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Post by xShadowLordx on Aug 1, 2008 10:41:05 GMT -5
Yeah, it's pretty cool.
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Post by Exthara on Aug 1, 2008 14:15:32 GMT -5
Crap,Its liar -.-"
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Post by ROBiT on Aug 1, 2008 14:25:05 GMT -5
Lol, nice poem/story/w/e.
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Post by Exthara on Aug 1, 2008 14:37:49 GMT -5
It's not a poem,
Not a story,
It's a feeling,
A form of rage.
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Post by ROBiT on Aug 1, 2008 14:39:20 GMT -5
Hence the w/e.
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Post by kolodziejboy on Aug 1, 2008 23:27:54 GMT -5
Yeah nice w/e lol
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Post by Supermike not logged in again on Aug 2, 2008 0:42:22 GMT -5
Way too emoish for me.. I hate emo stuff...
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Post by xShadowLordx on Aug 2, 2008 8:07:11 GMT -5
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Post by Exthara on Aug 2, 2008 9:36:58 GMT -5
Its not meant to be emo -.-"I was gonna change my name but listo made that impossible. The whole emo kid thing was a joke.
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Post by xShadowLordx on Aug 2, 2008 9:42:30 GMT -5
You mean you're not really emo?!?!??!?
Anyway lol, I can change your name for you. I don't know why, but I have the power to change names. I went to edit my profile one day and the "Display Name" thing was there.
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Post by Exthara on Aug 2, 2008 9:44:12 GMT -5
I am emo, but not a stereotypical emo, I just hate my life. I wanna change my name to- Demon Fire
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Post by xShadowLordx on Aug 2, 2008 9:45:58 GMT -5
Ok, done!
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Post by Exthara on Aug 2, 2008 9:51:17 GMT -5
THX
And do you think Ideserve story badge
Because I think Raikon and me might...
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Post by xShadowLordx on Aug 2, 2008 9:53:42 GMT -5
Yes I think you deserve it.
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Post by Supermike still not logged in on Aug 2, 2008 10:22:02 GMT -5
I am emo, but not a stereotypical emo, I just hate my life. I wanna change my name to- Demon Fire You hate your life? that makes you a stereotypical emo... |
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Post by ROBiT on Aug 4, 2008 0:04:37 GMT -5
TSL, change my name to Phreak, please?[/offtopic]
Supermike, that's what he said...
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Post by ShiningSilver on Aug 4, 2008 14:43:50 GMT -5
The "beatings" in the poem is off... (If its not a poem then good for you  ) |
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Post by The One on Aug 4, 2008 16:49:41 GMT -5
Nahh i think its a fine poem.
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